Talk:Guardian Conflict/@comment-11380282-20130701091617/@comment-5203931-20130701094117

I am going to have to agree with Jayjonesiv, please be more careful with spelling and grammer. I understand the need to complete your article quickly but several portions of your writing were very hard to read. You are doing very good but please please please be more careful.

Also please remember to check your numbers again, even the real Battlestar Pegasus only mustered 20 squadrons of 10 Vipers each. 400 is too high for a ship being built over 40-years earlier than it should have been.

Thanks again.